
【設(shè)計意圖】學(xué)習(xí)事理說明文,要讓學(xué)生在自主歸納的過程中,初步感知事理說明文說明“事理”這一基本特點,把握事理說明文和事物說明文的不同之處。引導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過學(xué)習(xí)課文,對科學(xué)方法產(chǎn)生自己的體會,并運用到自己的思考中。四、總結(jié)存儲1.教師小結(jié)本文是一篇事理說明文,作者把一門科學(xué)——物候?qū)W介紹得淺顯易懂,饒有趣味。全文采用邏輯順序說明,思路清晰明了:描述物候現(xiàn)象——做出科學(xué)解釋——追究因果關(guān)系——闡述研究意義。這種從現(xiàn)象到本質(zhì)的認(rèn)識方法和行文思路值得我們學(xué)習(xí)。本文語言嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)而生動,兼具說明的科學(xué)性和生動性,是一篇極有價值的科普文,是科學(xué)家竺可楨科學(xué)精神和科學(xué)思想的具體體現(xiàn)。文章啟發(fā)我們:科學(xué)距離我們并不遙遠(yuǎn),就在我們的身邊,而想要探索它,就要有科學(xué)精神,擴(kuò)大科學(xué)知識儲備,掌握科學(xué)方法,勇于探索科學(xué)奧秘。

結(jié)束這節(jié)課,我心里很輕松,因為在以往的教學(xué)中學(xué)生感覺到:說明文很單調(diào)、枯燥不生動。而本節(jié)課學(xué)生與我配合得非常好,原因是我利用多媒體展示的幾幅畫面,把學(xué)生的注意力都集中在所講的內(nèi)容中,并且調(diào)動了學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的積極性,認(rèn)為物候現(xiàn)象就在我們的身邊,激發(fā)學(xué)生探索科學(xué)奧秘的興趣,更多地去了解大自然,認(rèn)識大自然,熱愛大自然。在初讀課文的時候,我訓(xùn)練了學(xué)生的概括能力;在分清舉例說明的方法時,讓學(xué)生明白什么是舉例子的說明方法;在細(xì)讀課文的時候,讓學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生動地有條理地說明事物的方法,還重點品味第一段的生動語言,在品味說明文語言的準(zhǔn)確性時,有日常生活中的例子導(dǎo)入,深入淺出地講解了說明語言準(zhǔn)確性的兩點情況。

1、結(jié)合具體生活場景,能運用所學(xué)的乘法口訣解決簡單的實際問題,通過圖與式的對應(yīng),進(jìn)一步理解乘法的意義。 2、能熟練運用口訣進(jìn)行計算,提高靈活運用口訣解決實際問題的能力。 3、體會數(shù)學(xué)與實際生活的聯(lián)系,培養(yǎng)用數(shù)學(xué)的意識,體驗口訣在解決問題中的作用。 運用所學(xué)乘法解決簡單的實際問題。 結(jié)合實際情景理解乘法的意義。 1、口算: 5×2=10 6×2=12 8×5=40 2×7=14 5×9=45 3×5=15 2×6=12 2×9=18 4×2=8 2、談話導(dǎo)入:在前面的學(xué)習(xí)中,我們認(rèn)識了乘法,而且還學(xué)習(xí)了2和5的乘法口訣。這節(jié)課,老師想請同學(xué)們用這些跟乘法有關(guān)的知識來幫助老師一起解決生活中遇到的問題,一起來看一看吧??鞓沸菹r間到了,學(xué)校的大操場突然熱鬧起來了,你們一定非常喜歡課件活動吧!看,操場上同學(xué)們有的在玩老鷹捉小雞的游戲,有的在進(jìn)行乒乓球比賽,有的在跳繩,還有的在踢毽子……真熱鬧?。?/p>

Teaching Goal:1. General aims:Talk about recent past events2. Particular aims:A. Language Focus.Talk about recent past events and think of the past events.B. Language goalsHow was….?It was …What did …do over the weekend?C. Language structures:(1). How was your weekend? I was great. Pay attention to no form.(2). What did you do over the weekend? I played soccer. We went to the beach.D. Useful words and phrases:Words: was, did, went, beach, over, project, test, wasn’t, false, number, geography, spend, week, most, mixture, their, had, little, cook, read, saw, change, everyone, sit, sat, no, anythingPhrases: did one’s homework, played soccer, cleaned my room, went to the beach, played tennis, went to the movies, on Saturday morning, over the weekend, cook … for, what about, do some reading, have a party, talk show, go shoppingE. Grammar language:Present simple past tenseRegular and irregular verbsF. Learning strategies:Tour and holidaysG. Interdiscipinary:H. Emotion and manner:Teaching time: 5 periodsTeaching procedures:Period One教學(xué)步驟、時間 教師活動 學(xué)生活動 媒體應(yīng)用Step 1Free talk 3’ Ask some questions like:Who’s on duty today?What’s the weather like? Answer and talk about something.讓同學(xué)們回答下列問題1. Do you like weekend? (Let some students answer)It takes them three minutes to talk about the question.2. Why do you like weekend? (let the students answer) Most of the students like the weekend此時教師用漢語問:“在周末期間問你干了什么?這句話用英語這么回答?Let the students guess.At last the teacher give them right answer3. What did you do over the weekend?(板書、學(xué)習(xí))

教學(xué)過程Step 1: warming-up Sing a song---------“food and drink” Step 2: Revision1 Dictation2 Revise: What kind of noodles would you like?I’d like …What size bowl of noodles would you like?I’d like…Step 3: Presentation1 show pictures of food, ask students say the words.2 Students read the newspaper ad in 3a. Fill in blanks with words in the box. Then read the ad together, the teacher explains some difficult language points.3 Check the answers Step 4 PracticeAsk students to finish 3b in the same way according to 3a. Students read the short passage and fill in the blanks .At last, check the answers.Step 5 productionAsk students to write their own ad for dumplings, noodles, drinks, and other foods they know. Then ask students to read their partner’s ad. Then order food and drink from their partner.Step 6 Home workGroup work – make an ad about “food and drink”

2.1Match the country with the language.Step II Reading3a? let the students read the letter fast and answer the questions.? Let the students ask more questions about the letter as possible as the can.Step III Writing3b.Step IV. Pairwork2cStep V Listening2a, 2bStep V. HomeworkExercises book(1) P3Exercises book (2) P3Period FourStep I . Dictate the words and sentences in Unit1.Step II. Self-checkStep III. Check the answers for Exercises book in the unit.Step IV. Home workRevise and preparation for unit 2.教學(xué)反思:通過本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生基本可以談?wù)撊藗兊膰?,居住城市及其所說的語言,通過書信方式去介紹自己并尋找筆友。但在涉及到國外的一些城市時,學(xué)生對這方面的知識相對欠缺,能介紹的城市并不多,也反應(yīng)出學(xué)生課前預(yù)習(xí)不充分,這跟學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)條件也有關(guān),大多數(shù)學(xué)生無法通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)獲取所需信息。因此,在以后的教學(xué)中要多指導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過計算機(jī)網(wǎng)絡(luò)獲取信息,拓寬知識面。

五、教學(xué)Section B-2c1. Pair work: What do you think of the belt/sunglasses/…? What does your father/mother/… think of your scarf/belt…?2. Group work(1). Teacher shows some different kinds of school uniforms (制服)and asks : “ What do you think of your school uniforms? If you have a chance to choose your school uniforms, what kind would you like to choose?”(2). Discuss in groups.(3).Get some Ss to report in class.說明:這一步旨在讓學(xué)生運用已有的語言知識談?wù)搶κ挛锏目捶ê鸵庖姡⒑唵侮U明理由,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的主動思維能力和運用英語的能力。六、教學(xué)拓展調(diào)查電視節(jié)目的收視率任務(wù):調(diào)查你周圍的人對現(xiàn)在各種電視節(jié)目的反響?;顒舆^程:1.教師布置任務(wù),讓學(xué)生調(diào)查周圍的人(包括他的親戚朋友和鄰居)喜歡收看哪方面的電視節(jié)目。2.學(xué)生進(jìn)行調(diào)查活動,運用本單元所學(xué)的句型What do you think of….? (Why?)What's your favorite game shows?What do you think of talk show?I doesn’t mind it.I like it.I love it.I can’t stand it.3.記錄下排在前10位的TV Program,填寫調(diào)查表,比較其收視率。

句型: Where did you go on vacation? I went to summer camp.Did she go to Central Park?Yes,she did.No, she didn’t語法:一般過去時特殊疑問句、一般疑問句及肯、否定回答。課時安排4課時第一課時:Section A:la,1b,lc,2a,2b,2c 第二課時:Section A:3a,3b,4第三課時:Section B:1,2a,2b,2c第四課時:Section B:3a,3b,3c,4 and Self Check第一課時教學(xué)目標(biāo)掌握描寫假期生活的形容詞。假期里自己所做事情的簡單表達(dá)。談?wù)摷倨谧龅氖虑榧爱?dāng)時情況。談?wù)摷倨跁r旅游的天氣,旅游者以及食物等。教學(xué)過程一、導(dǎo)入播放一首英文歌曲:Let’s travel 說明:通過讓學(xué)生聽節(jié)奏歡快迪斯尼英語歌曲Let’s travel.引入本節(jié)課談?wù)摰脑掝}vacation and travel. 讓歌曲使學(xué)生的思維活躍,增強(qiáng)課堂氣氛,激發(fā)學(xué)生提高學(xué)習(xí)英語的興趣。T:How is the trip ?Ss : It’s pretty good/ happy/exciting /relaxing/busy/dangerous/ fantastic說明:這個問題是為了操練形容詞。建議讓多個Ss作答。鼓勵他們用不同的形容詞。上述個別形容詞本應(yīng)在第二課時中出現(xiàn),但可以在warming-up中第一次非正式出現(xiàn)。這些形容詞也可在老師的評價語中適時出現(xiàn),以加深學(xué)生對詞匯的印象。

三、教學(xué)建議第一課時:1. Lead in (Vocabulary)A) Before class, teacher should collect some pictures of working places. For example: Bank, TV Station, Restaurant, Police Station, Hospital ...B) In class, show students the pictures (PowerPoint, OHP). Ask students to tell the name of the working places and the name of the jobs.Shop assistant, doctor, actor, reporter, police office, waiter, bank clerk, studentC) Do exercise 1a and 3a.2. Bingo GameAsk groups of students to make up pairs of cards with a job on one and the related workplace on the other. For example, waiter / restaurant, teacher / school, doctor / hospital. Encourage students to use both the job / workplace combinations in the book and the ones that students came up during class discussions. Be sure they have twice as many sets of cards as there are students in the group. They can make two sets of cards for a single job / workplace, if necessary. Then have each group mix up its set of cards and hand their cards out in random order. Each time a student gets a pair of cards that match, he or she can lay these cards down. The goal is to have no cards in your hand at the end.3. Task OneA) Ask students to work in pairs and ask the partner what does he / she want to be in the future.e. g. :What do you / does he / does she want to be?I want to be a.Why?Because it's (adj).B) Vocabulary: Section B, 1a4. Homework 1.2.

1 Each group choose one place to describe and what you are doing in it Choose one place, and describe what they are doing 2 Move around the room and give suggestions Talk about it and write it down 3 Ask one to show their works and act it Choose one of each group to make a report 4 Evaluate the best group and the best reporter Choose the best one Homework Ask your friends their ideal place and write about it教學(xué)反思:新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生在課堂中的主體地位,在綜合課中他們的主體地位就更加突出。在各個活動中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會,從而產(chǎn)生對英語的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來輔助教學(xué),效果更好。同時讓了解其他國家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知知識,實現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。教案點評:采用任務(wù)型教學(xué)模式,在各個活動中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會,從而產(chǎn)生對英語的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來輔助教學(xué),效果更好。讓了解其他國家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知識,實現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。

所需要用到的句子:Who is that?That is Jack. I like him.Why do you like him?I like him because he is interesting.Task 4: 設(shè)計理想中的人類Step one: 設(shè)計理想中的人類的外貌。把全班同學(xué)分成若干小組,學(xué)生可以邊說邊在紙上畫出他們的模樣。Step two: 設(shè)計理想中人類的性格。學(xué)生們可以把那些能描述性格的單詞寫在圖畫的旁邊。Step three: 每組選出一名同學(xué),其他同組同學(xué)提問,他作簡單回答,并說明原因。所需用到的句子:What does he or she look like?He or she ...What is he or she like?He or she is ...Why?Because ...Task 5: 挑戰(zhàn)性活動調(diào)查性格是天生的還是后天形成的,讓每個同學(xué)回家去調(diào)查一下自己成長過程中性格是否有變化,具體是怎樣的,為什么會這樣? Teaching Aims:1. Enable students to have a general understanding of how to talk about people's physical appearance.2. Enable students to tackle some essential vocabularies and patterns about describing people. Provide them with necessary skills and methods.3. Create various chances for students to describe the persons they're familiar with, such as classmates, family members, teachers, idols, etc.

Period 2 (3a----Section B 2c)Preview(Pre-task): Key points: What laAdd another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardnguage does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Preview(Pre-task): Add another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardKey points: What language does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Step 1 Revision1.Revisionand dictation of the new words 2.Revise the drills they learned yesterday.(by pairwork and grammar exercise)Step 2 Leading-inT has a conversation with one student. The conversation is following:---Do you have a pen pal?---Yes, I do.---What's your pen pal's name? ---His/Her name is....---Where is your pen pal from? ---He/She is from...---Where does he/she live? ---He/She lives in....---What language does he/she speak?He/She speaks...Write the new words on the Bb. They are following: EnglishChineseJapaneseFrenchStep 3 LearnLearn the new words with the whole class.Finish 3a with the students3b Pairwork T still does an example with one student Then the Ss practise in pairs. The example is following:--Curry Muray is my pen pal. He is from the United States.---What language does he speak?

Don’t fight. =You can’t fight. (板書,教讀)教師把這些句子板書在黑板上,并請學(xué)生大聲整齊地讀祈使句和“can’t”句型,并讓學(xué)生注意兩種句型表達(dá)形式的不同和轉(zhuǎn)換,“Don’t …=You can’t…”;并對學(xué)生說:These are our school rules. (板書,教讀) You can’t break the school rules. Don’t break the school rules.(板書,教讀)步驟3 :Practicea. T: Now, each of the students is breaking one of these rules.Please finish 1a.學(xué)生看圖,完成1a的內(nèi)容,檢查答案并大聲朗讀校規(guī)。b. 聽錄音,完成1b,選出四位學(xué)生都違反了哪條校規(guī);聽之前,學(xué)生要讀會英文名。c. 請兩位學(xué)生朗讀1c部分的句型;要求學(xué)生兩人一組對話表演,SA扮演外校轉(zhuǎn)來新生,SB告知本校校規(guī)。(學(xué)生可經(jīng)過討論,多說出他們想到的校規(guī),不必只限于書上;教師應(yīng)給予幫助)2) 第二課時(2a~4)步驟1 :warming up of revisionT: What are the rules at your school?學(xué)生使用“can”或祈使句表達(dá)各條校規(guī);其中老師可引出“eat in the cafeteria outside”的表達(dá)。步驟2 :Practicea.T: Christina is an exchange student. She doesn’t know the rules. Let’s listen, what activities they’re talking about?學(xué)生聽第一遍時,完成2a;第二遍時,完成2b;b. 請學(xué)生領(lǐng)讀2c部分,看著2a完成的表格,理解2c活動的要求;分成小組針對2a進(jìn)行問答;

單元整體說明(一)單元教材分析本單元的核心話題是描述動物和表達(dá)個人喜好,以及句式why do you like…? Because…。這也是本單元的教學(xué)重點。通過本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生應(yīng)能較流利地運用所學(xué)詞匯和句型描述動物,表達(dá)個人喜好。(二)單元知識結(jié)構(gòu)1.詞匯動物名稱 tiger, elephant, koala, dolphin, etc.詞匯描述性形容詞: smart, cute, ugly, clever, shy, etc.國家名: Australia, South Africa2.句型Why do you like koala hears? Because they are cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(三)單元整體目標(biāo)1.Master the vocabulary2.Master and use: Why do you like koalas? Because they am cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(四)單元教學(xué)重難點一覽(五)單元學(xué)情分析學(xué)生此前已經(jīng)學(xué)過由why, where, what 引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問句句型,具有了學(xué)習(xí)本單元知識的認(rèn)知前提。形形色色的動物能激發(fā)學(xué)生的好奇心,產(chǎn)生了解它們的欲望,這有利于本單元知識的教學(xué)和學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣的培養(yǎng)。

四、品讀揣摩詩歌情志1.讀出意境畫面。師:請同學(xué)們以小組為單位,齊聲朗讀詩歌,然后合作交流,探究下面問題。(1)詩人用了哪些意象來表現(xiàn)晚春景色?詩人用了什么手法來寫晚春景物?取得了怎樣的藝術(shù)效果?(2)詩歌一、二句寫出了怎樣的晚春景致?請同學(xué)們用自己的語言描繪出來。(3)詩的三、四句意蘊深刻,為歷代傳誦。請從修辭手法的角度對這兩句詩進(jìn)行賞析。(生齊讀后,小組交流、討論問題,師指導(dǎo)明確)預(yù)設(shè) (1)詩人用了草樹、楊花、榆莢等意象表現(xiàn)晚春景色。一個“斗”字,運用擬人的修辭手法,把花朵人格化,形象生動地寫出了晚春時節(jié)花草樹木爭芳斗艷的美麗景象?;ú輼淠痉路鸲加辛饲樗迹辛藗€性,成了精靈,使描繪的晚春景致生動而有情趣。

師小結(jié):《己亥雜詩》(其五)抒發(fā)了詩人離京南返的無盡愁緒,也表達(dá)出詩人雖已辭官,仍決心為國效力、奉獻(xiàn)終生的決心,以及對國家民族的那份執(zhí)著摯愛之情。全詩寄情于物,形象貼切,渾然一體,感人至深?!驹O(shè)計意圖】本環(huán)節(jié)運用知人論世的方法,巧妙地將詩歌和寫作背景糅合在一起,讓學(xué)生逐步深入地理解詩人的情感和志趣。五、總結(jié)存儲1.教師總結(jié)。本課學(xué)習(xí)了兩首詩,讓我們又獲得了新的教益?!队紊轿鞔濉分械拿洹吧街厮畯?fù)疑無路,柳暗花明又一村”讓我們明白了在困境中堅持下去,也許會出現(xiàn)令人豁然開朗的轉(zhuǎn)變,世間事物是消長變化的。《己亥雜詩》(其五)中的名句“落紅不是無情物,化作春泥更護(hù)花”讓我們感受到作者的愛國憂民、無私奉獻(xiàn)精神。希望同學(xué)們能熱愛傳統(tǒng)文化,熱愛古代的詩歌藝術(shù),讓這些經(jīng)典文化伴你們健康成長。2.布置作業(yè)。(1)背誦并用楷書工整、規(guī)范地默寫這兩首詩。(2)選擇感受最深的一首,發(fā)揮想象,寫成一篇文章。(500字左右)。

本課由兩篇短小易懂、文辭優(yōu)美的文言文組成,針對這一特點,本課設(shè)計分為兩課時,先通過教讀《陋室銘》學(xué)習(xí)托物言志,再通過自主學(xué)習(xí)《愛蓮說》來理解托物言志,采用先教后學(xué)的模式進(jìn)行教學(xué)。在《陋室銘》教學(xué)中,設(shè)計“朗讀”“品讀”“析讀”“聯(lián)讀”四個環(huán)節(jié),逐層深入,在讀中明特點,讀中明志趣,讀中析寫法,讀中悟主旨。以詩人積極的人生態(tài)度、豁達(dá)的胸襟為行文線索,從文本出發(fā),深入解讀文本,讓學(xué)生逐步理解詩人面對苦難仍能堅守自我的人生態(tài)度和高尚情操,同時讓學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)托物言志的手法,了解這類文章的特點?!稅凵徴f》采取自主學(xué)習(xí)的模式,分兩步進(jìn)行。先運用上節(jié)課的四個環(huán)節(jié),在老師的指導(dǎo)下,進(jìn)行自主合作學(xué)習(xí)。老師給予學(xué)生自學(xué)方法,并適時引導(dǎo),讓學(xué)生逐步完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù),以此理解文章內(nèi)容,提高學(xué)生自主學(xué)習(xí)文言文的能力;再采用競賽的方式展示學(xué)習(xí)成果,以幾個不同形式的比賽,來激發(fā)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣,讓學(xué)生在競賽中夯實文言文的基礎(chǔ)知識,在競賽中加深對文章的理解,學(xué)會探究。本課整個教學(xué)設(shè)計思路清晰,教學(xué)方法可操作性強(qiáng)。

三、暢意表達(dá),理解英雄1.暢意表達(dá)。師:通過學(xué)習(xí)課文,你們明白了楊利偉為什么被稱為“航天英雄”嗎?請同學(xué)們大膽表達(dá)自己的想法。(生自由交流回答)預(yù)設(shè) 楊利偉是中國人民解放軍航天員大隊的首飛航天員,圓滿完成了中國的第一次載人航天飛行任務(wù)。在充滿不可預(yù)料的各種危險和意外的情況下,楊利偉為了國家、民族的利益奮不顧身,他具有不怕犧牲、敢于犧牲的大無畏精神和拼搏勇氣,所以被稱為“航天英雄”。2.理解英雄。師:是否只有為國捐軀者才能成為英雄呢?請同學(xué)們四人一小組討論一下,然后說說你們組的意見。(生小組內(nèi)交流討論后,推薦代表在全班交流,師指導(dǎo)明確)預(yù)設(shè) 不是的。凡是為了國家、民族的利益而不顧個人安危,并為此奉獻(xiàn)出自己的智慧和力量的人,都應(yīng)該給予英雄的榮譽(yù)。楊利偉在中國的第一次載人航天飛行中,遇到許多突發(fā)事件,危難考驗不時出現(xiàn),如果沒有大無畏的精神,沒有為國家、民族做貢獻(xiàn)的意識,是不可能臨危不懼、堅持到底的。

五、細(xì)讀詩歌,明確寫法1.明確文章寫法。這首詩中詩人描寫的是自然界的道路,但是同時又暗含著詩人對人生之路的思考。這首詩中的這種寫法與《假如生活欺騙了你》中的寫法一樣嗎?為什么?預(yù)設(shè) 不一樣。這首詩中詩人運用了大量形象闡釋哲理,運用了許多詠物詩、哲理詩采用的象征手法,耐人尋味。對詩歌創(chuàng)作,弗羅斯特有獨具一格的方法與原則,他認(rèn)為詩歌應(yīng)“始于愉悅,終于智慧”,應(yīng)該給人以美的享受和思想上的啟迪。從以上的學(xué)習(xí)中我們可以看出,詩人弗羅斯特用簡單的語言、豐富的象征,巧妙地將自己對社會、自然、人生的了解和思考融入豐富的詩歌形象之中,運用人們熟悉又帶有神秘色彩的自然場景,向人們闡釋人生哲理,向人們展示他理解的人生,以及他對人生、對社會的探索。2.了解象征手法。象征是詩歌創(chuàng)作中經(jīng)常運用的一種寫作方法,詩歌一般都會通過一定的藝術(shù)形象,生動鮮明地將主題含蓄地表達(dá)出來。

二、升格訓(xùn)練師:大文豪曹雪芹寫《紅樓夢》是“披閱十載,增刪五次”,可見修改是寫作獲得成功的必然環(huán)節(jié),很多文學(xué)名家對此也深有感觸。這些古今中外的作家,都向我們推薦了一種修改文章的好方法——朗讀修改法。結(jié)合你自己的寫作經(jīng)驗,你覺得大聲朗讀可以發(fā)現(xiàn)習(xí)作中的哪些問題?預(yù)設(shè) 如有些詞語聽起來不順耳,有些句子讀起來不順口,有些段落缺少過渡,或前后意思重復(fù),有些地方表達(dá)不清楚,有些修辭手法的運用欠妥,有些標(biāo)點的運用不規(guī)范等,這些問題都能夠在朗讀中發(fā)現(xiàn)。2.再改隨筆。師:之前修改寫景隨筆,用的是默讀修改法,這次換作朗讀修改法,會不會有新的收獲呢?請大家朗讀病文,然后小組討論:文中還有哪些用詞不恰當(dāng)、語句不連貫的地方,找出來并進(jìn)行修改,使之文從字順。(生朗讀隨筆,修改后交流討論并展示)預(yù)設(shè) (1)“有什么輕柔的東西拂到臉上,細(xì)細(xì)的”,可以把“輕柔的”改成疊詞“柔柔的”,放到后面,和“細(xì)細(xì)的”并列,這樣讀起來音律感要好些。
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