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人教版高中地理必修1宇宙中的地球教案
從質(zhì)量、體積、平均密度、公轉(zhuǎn)與自轉(zhuǎn)周期等各方面，地球沒有一項是最大值或最小值，這說明地球僅僅是太陽系中一顆最普通不過的一顆行星。2、地球又是一顆特殊的行星。問題 ：為什么？因為地球是目前我們已知的唯一存在生物，特點是存在高級智慧生物的天體。問題：為什么地球上會存在生命？原因：（1）地球所處的宇宙環(huán)境來說：地球處于一種相對安全的宇宙環(huán)境。例：A、九大行星公轉(zhuǎn)的同向性、同面 性、及公 轉(zhuǎn)軌道的近圓性。B 太陽光照條件的穩(wěn)定性。從地球產(chǎn)生到地球上有生物，幾十億年期間，太陽 沒有明顯的變化，地球所處的光照條件一直較穩(wěn)定，生命演化沒有中斷。（2）地球自身的物質(zhì)條件：例：A 日地距離適中，形成了適宜的溫度：日地距離適中，地球表面平均溫度15度，適合生物的生存。（擴展：地球自轉(zhuǎn)速度適中，大氣層的保溫效應(yīng)）B 地球質(zhì)量與體積適中，使地球有了適合的大氣條件。C 原始海洋的形成 ：使 生命的出現(xiàn)成為可能。
人教版高中地理必修1氣壓帶和風(fēng)帶教案
知識和技能 1、指導(dǎo)學(xué)生繪制氣壓帶和風(fēng)帶分布示意圖，從中分析大氣運動的規(guī)律性，并培養(yǎng)和提高學(xué)生繪制原理形成示意圖的地理技能。2、運用海陸熱力差異原理進行解釋，加強學(xué) 生對半球冬夏季氣壓中心的形成和分布的理解解。3、使學(xué)生理解氣壓帶和風(fēng)帶對氣候的影響。過程與方法 1、通過三圈環(huán)流模擬演示，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的空間思維能力。2、通過對海陸分布對大氣環(huán)流影響的兩圖示的對比分析，讓學(xué)生讀圖思考氣壓帶、風(fēng)帶的分布規(guī)律和原因。3、利用成因分析法引導(dǎo)學(xué)生探究氣壓帶和風(fēng)帶對氣候的影響機制。情感、態(tài)度與價值觀1、培養(yǎng)學(xué)生辯證唯物主義觀。2、培養(yǎng)學(xué)生理論聯(lián)系實際的能力。教學(xué)重點1、氣壓帶和風(fēng)帶的分布。2、北半球氣壓中心冬夏分布及對氣候的影響。3、氣壓帶和風(fēng)帶對氣候的影響。
人教版高中語文必修1《小狗包弟》教案2篇
巴金在十年浩劫中的大致經(jīng)歷：放棄包弟并沒有換得保全一家人，1968年8月，巴金被關(guān)進牛棚改造，隨后經(jīng)受了大字報、掛牌游街等形式的批斗。1970年，到農(nóng)村改造，掏大糞、喂豬、背稻草、種地……1972年，妻子蕭珊在飽受精神折磨后患上癌癥，病逝。巴金的兒子在勞動改造的過程中也飽受精神和肉體上的折磨，性格變得內(nèi)向抑郁，疾病纏身。此時，巴金69歲。巴金曾在《病中》一文寫道：“當姚文元拿著棒子的時候，我給關(guān)在牛棚里除了唯唯諾諾之外，敢于做過什么事情？十年間我不過是一條含著眼淚等人宰割的牛?！毙〗Y(jié)：（幻燈片12）社會是病態(tài)的社會，政治是高壓的政治，人性是扭曲的人性。十年文革，十年浩劫，給多少人留下了累累不可彌合的精神創(chuàng)傷。即使一條小狗，也可能擺脫不了“文革”無情的迫害，比如包弟，比如藝術(shù)家鄰居的小狗。
人教版高中語文必修1《大衛(wèi)·科波菲爾》教案2篇
（1）主人公大衛(wèi)·科波菲爾：大衛(wèi)·科波菲爾是《大衛(wèi)·科波菲爾》中的主人公，曾經(jīng)是個孤兒。作家描寫了他從孤兒成長為一個具有人道主義精神的資產(chǎn)階級民主主義作家的過程。他善良，誠摯，聰明，勤奮好學(xué)，有自強不息的勇氣、百折不回的毅力和積極進取的精神，在逆境中滿懷信心，在順境中加倍努力，終于獲得了事業(yè)上的成功和家庭的幸福。在這個人物身上寄托著狄更斯的道德理想。（2）《大衛(wèi)·科波菲爾》中的女性形象：在狄更斯筆下，《大衛(wèi)·科波菲爾》塑造了一個個有血有肉的人物形象，每個任務(wù)都給人留下了深刻的印象，尤其是成功塑造了不同性格、不同品德的女性形象：貝西姨婆、艾妮斯、佩葛蒂、克拉拉、朵拉、摩德斯通小姐、米考伯太太、艾米麗……貝西姨婆與摩德斯通小姐的對比，克拉拉、朵拉與艾妮斯的對比更使她們栩栩如生，對貝西姨婆、艾妮斯、佩葛蒂的愛就更深一層，對摩德斯通小姐更是恨之入骨，對朵拉、克拉拉既同情又氣憤。
人教版高中語文必修1《鴻門宴》教案
劉邦：先看劉邦對項伯的表白（此話也是有意讓項伯轉(zhuǎn)述給項羽聽的）：“秋毫不敢有所近”——說“不敢”而不說“不曾”，多么恭順！“籍吏民，封府庫，而待將軍”——“待”，多么虔誠！“日夜望將軍至”——說“望”而不說“等”，多么迫切！再看劉邦的卑詞“謝罪”：他言必稱“將軍”，說自己與項羽“戮力而攻秦”，是戰(zhàn)友而非敵人；將“先入關(guān)破秦”說成是不自意，以表自己的力量不如項羽；把“得復(fù)見將軍于此”當作是自己莫大的榮幸以滿足項羽的虛榮心；最后，他還把項羽的憤怒歸咎于“小人”的挑撥，為項羽推卸責(zé)任，及時給項羽一個臺階下。小結(jié)：項羽：沽名釣譽、輕敵自大、寡謀輕信、不善用人、剛愎自用、優(yōu)柔寡斷的一介武夫。劉邦：狡詐多謀、遇事果斷、臨危不懼、能屈能伸、善于用人。
人教版高中語文必修1《奇妙的對聯(lián)》教案2篇
3、介紹對聯(lián)的歷史引出本課的重點。人類歷史上的第一副對聯(lián)是“新年納余慶，嘉節(jié)號長春”。出現(xiàn)在五代十國時期（公元964年），距離現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)有1044年了。有著一千多年歷史的對聯(lián)有什么基本的特點呢？這是我們這節(jié)課學(xué)習(xí)的重點。請在座的各位當回醫(yī)生，給下面這幅對聯(lián)號號脈，看它對仗是否工整？上聯(lián)：冬去春來千條楊柳迎風(fēng)綠下聯(lián)：冰消雪化梅花萬朵撲鼻有什么問題，怎么改？剛才這幾位同學(xué)指出了這幅對聯(lián)的兩個問題，也提出了兩條修改意見。第一是下聯(lián)少了一個字，最好是添加一個“香”字；第二是下聯(lián)的“梅花萬朵”與上聯(lián)的“千條楊柳”是數(shù)量詞對名詞，名詞對數(shù)量詞，對仗不工整，要調(diào)整為“萬朵梅花”。這樣，數(shù)量詞“萬朵”對“千條”，名詞“梅花”對“楊柳”。大家還有沒有不同的看法。這樣我們就可以得出對聯(lián)的兩個特點特點：第一個特點是上下聯(lián)字數(shù)要相等（板書）。就是上聯(lián)有幾個字，下聯(lián)也要有幾個字。大家記下來，對聯(lián)基本要求一，“上下聯(lián)字數(shù)相等”。這個要求是很嚴格的，一般來說，違反這個規(guī)則就不成對聯(lián)了。
人教版高中語文必修1《優(yōu)美的漢字》教案2篇
書法藝術(shù)的繁榮期，是從東漢開始的東漢時期出現(xiàn)了專門的書法理論著作，最早的書法理論提出者是東西漢之交的揚雄第一部書法理論專著是東漢時期崔瑗的《草書勢》漢代書法家可分為兩類：一類是漢隸書家，以蔡邕為代表一類是草書家，以杜度、崔瑗、張芝為代表，張芝被后人稱之為“草圣”最能代表漢代書法特色的，莫過於是碑刻和簡牘上的書法東漢碑刻林立，這一時期的碑刻，以漢隸刻之，字型方正，法度謹嚴、波磔分明此時隸書已登峰造極漢代創(chuàng)興草書，草書的誕生，在書法藝術(shù)的發(fā)展史上有著重大意義它標志著書法開始成為一種能夠高度自由的抒發(fā)情感，表現(xiàn)書法家個性的藝術(shù)草書的最初階段是草隸，到了東漢時期，草隸進一步發(fā)展，形成了章草，后由張芝創(chuàng)立了今草，即草書
人教版高中語文必修3《馬嵬（其二）》教案2篇
結(jié)合歷史自古以來，江山美人歷來都是引無數(shù)英雄豪杰競折腰的，如果說英雄選擇了美人卻丟了江山，把所有罪名都歸結(jié)于“女人是禍水”。但是，紂王無道，和有了妲己有必然的聯(lián)系嗎？有人說妲己壞透了，壞透了的妲己如果不是取得紂王的信任是壞不起來的，紂王聽信了妲己的讒言，聽與不聽決定權(quán)在紂王，而不在妲己。強勢永遠在紂王一邊。再來看看西施和楊貴妃：西施是作為越國貢獻給吳國的供品來到吳王夫差的身邊的，楊貴妃更是先是李隆基的兒媳婦被看中而得寵的。所以，西施和楊貴妃這兩個可憐的女人根本沒有自己的獨立選擇，沒有獨立的愛情，如果沒有西施，就會有南施，或北施；如果沒有楊貴妃，就會有李貴妃，王貴妃，總之什么施，什么妃是不能少的，因為那是吳王和李隆基的需要。
人教版高中語文必修3《宇宙的邊疆》教案
一、內(nèi)容與解析從古代運用天文方法確定耕作時間，到現(xiàn)代對宇宙形成演變的種種假設(shè)，對宇宙的探索，已經(jīng)成為人類生活的一部分。宇宙從何而來，向何而去，人類從何而來，向何而去，這些基本問題不僅具有科學(xué)意義，而且具有哲學(xué)的意味。以前教材中沒有出現(xiàn)過解說詞，但是在日常生活中，我們經(jīng)常接觸到各類解說詞，可以讓學(xué)生聯(lián)系實際，了解解說詞的特點；也可以找來其他科學(xué)電視片，結(jié)合視覺畫面，讓學(xué)生全面地感受解說詞的特點。二、教學(xué)目標及解析（一）教學(xué)目標1．引導(dǎo)學(xué)生聯(lián)系實際，了解解說詞的特點。2．引導(dǎo)學(xué)生了解一些有關(guān)宇宙的基礎(chǔ)知識。3．引導(dǎo)學(xué)生借助文中精辟的議論和熱烈的情感抒發(fā)，了解作者對宇宙和人類的思考，并引發(fā)自己的思考。
人教版高中語文必修3《祝福》教案2篇
小結(jié)人們對待祥林嫂這個“嫁而再寡”的不幸女人態(tài)度：①、魯四老爺?shù)膽B(tài)度：不讓她干祭祀的活（71、73、75、108通過四嬸先后三喊“你放著罷”，殺人不見血地葬送了祥林嫂的性命。而其中尤以最后一次對其打擊最大）。魯四老爺站在頑固維護封建宗法制度的立場上，從精神上殘酷地虐殺她。他暗暗地告誡四嬸的那段話，就是置祥林嫂于死地而又不露一絲血痕的軟刀子。②、魯四嬸的態(tài)度：魯四嬸是“大戶人家的太太”，頭一次留祥林嫂是看她能干，祥林嫂被婆家綁架走以后，她害怕給自己家惹麻煩。之后她惦念祥林嫂不是因為關(guān)心她的命運，而是自己的傭人都沒有祥林嫂那樣可心。以后祥林嫂再來，她“起初還躊躕”，后來倒是真心憐憫祥林嫂，留下她。但是祥林嫂不像過去那樣靈活能干了，四嬸開始“不滿”，進而“警告”，最后把祥林嫂趕出家門?？梢哉f，四嬸只是把祥林嫂當成一件工具罷了，沒有把她當人來看。
人教版高中語文必修5《歸去來兮辭（并序）》教案
【教學(xué)目標】1.理解作者反抗黑暗，辭官歸田，不與當時黑暗的上層社會同流合污而熱愛田園生活的積極精神，學(xué)習(xí)其高潔的理想志趣和堅定的人生追求。2.掌握“胡、奚、曷、焉、何”五個疑問代詞，歸納“行、引、乘、策”等四個詞的一詞多義，了解“以、而、之、兮、來”等文言虛詞的用法。3.背誦全文?！窘虒W(xué)重點】1.了解作者辭官歸田的原因，深刻體味詩人鄙棄官場，熱愛田園的無限欣喜之情。2.背誦全文?！窘虒W(xué)難點】1.理解記述中滲透出的或喜或哀，或決絕或猶疑的復(fù)雜感情。2.歸納實詞、虛詞的用法，掌握省略句、倒裝句兩種句式?！窘叹邷蕚洹客队皟x投影膠片【課時安排】2課時【教學(xué)過程】第一課時[教學(xué)要點]了解陶淵明及其作品。讀課文，利用注釋、工具書，初步把握文章，朗讀課文，找出押韻的字，由押韻歸納各層大意，幫助學(xué)生理清背誦思路，背誦全文。[教學(xué)步驟]一、導(dǎo)語《桃花源記》是我們在初中接觸過的陶淵明的作品。師生一同背誦?！短一ㄔ从洝分杏崎e自得的田園生活正是作者精神追求的形象反映。今天我們學(xué)習(xí)的《歸去來兮辭》正是作者決別官場，同上層社會分道揚鑣的宣言書。
人教版高中語文必修5《孟浩然》教案
【教學(xué)過程】導(dǎo)入：如果說唐詩是中國文學(xué)史中的一朵奇葩，那孟浩然則是點綴其上的一滴晶瑩露珠，其充滿魅力與特色的詩風(fēng)在盛唐獨樹一幟，也為其在人才濟濟的詩史上刻下了永恒的印記。同學(xué)們能否先回憶一下，我們學(xué)過的孟浩然的詩歌有哪些？（《春曉》、《宿建德江》、《望洞庭湖贈張丞相》、《過故人莊》。）我們常說"中國古詩寫胸襟，是人格美的自然流露"，那么孟詩在語言和思想情感上留給你怎樣的印象和感受？整體感知：本文作者聞一多先生也是一位詩人，所謂"英雄惜英雄"，相同的志向與情趣使聞一多似乎帶著我們在與孟浩然進行了一場心靈的對話。那么同學(xué)們在快速閱讀文章之后，能否先找出作者是選擇了一個怎樣的角度對孟浩然評價的？（詩如其人，人如其詩。）
人教版高中語文必修5《逍遙游》教案
六、到此為止，我們了解到，作者對“笑”鯤鵬和別人的蜩與學(xué)鳩、斥鴳、宋榮子都一一作了否定。那么請大家討論一下，1、作者對鯤鵬和“知效一官，行比一鄉(xiāng)，德合一君，而征一國者”是不是肯定呢？明確：也都作了否定。否定后者好理解，關(guān)鍵是否定前者不好理解，因為“鯤鵬展翅”早已作為積極的意象被人們廣泛引用。但在本文中，作者在講述這一寓言故事時，突出的不是鯤鵬本身，而是風(fēng)力，“故九萬里，風(fēng)斯在下矣，而后乃今培風(fēng)；背負青天，而莫之夭閼者，而后乃今將圖南”。對風(fēng)力作用的突出，實際上就是對鯤鵬的否定。作者寫了“笑”的雙方，對“笑”的一方蜩與學(xué)鳩、斥鴳、宋榮子都作了否定，對被“笑”的一方鯤鵬和“知效一官，行比一鄉(xiāng)，德合一君，而征一國者”也都作了否定，并且對順便提及的野馬、塵埃、芥、大舟、朝菌、蟪蛄、冥靈、大椿、彭祖、列子等事物或者人物也都作了否定。這種全盤否定的態(tài)度，如果我們借用本文中的一個形象的詞語，可以說是：笑！是的，本文也可以說是：莊子“笑”萬物！
新人教版高中英語必修1Unit 2 Travelling Around–Listening and Speaking教案
無論她說什么都不會對我們的安排有影響。Answers: for, arrangement3) Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.父母為孩子安排好一切，不遺余力地為他們的成功鋪路。4. extremely adv 極其，非常extreme adj 非常的1) Mary found it extremely difficult to get a job.2) I’m extremely sorry to have troubled you.Answers:瑪麗發(fā)現(xiàn)找工作極其困難。給你添了麻煩，我十分抱歉。3) It had white-painted tunnels and bright red carriages, and proved _________ (extreme) popular with the public.它有白色的隧道和明亮的紅色車廂，結(jié)果證明它非常受大眾的歡迎。Answers: extremelyExercises1. I am continuing to apply_______ jobs though I have failed several times.2. All this had an _______ (extremely) bad effect on the criminal justice system.3. The invention would have wide ______ (apply) in industry.4. She’s happy with her unusual living _________ (arrange).5. I was banging so loudly that I’m ___________ (amaze) that they didn’t hear me.6. You haven’t changed at all you still look ___________ (exact) the same.7. “Was it what you expected?” “Yes, _________ (definite).”8. He was looking forward to______ (work) with the newPrime Minister. Answers: for extreme application arrangement amazed exactly definitely looking單句寫作：1. _______________ (你要說些什么) when you get on the platform to accept the reward?2. Since_____________________(我們?yōu)檫@些事情做好了準備), we have nothing to worry about.
新人教版高中英語必修1Unit 5 Languages Around the World-Reading for Writing教案
Step 3: Read to sum upRead it again and sum up the problems of the three students, and then write down the advice that was given from others.Step 4: Work in pairs. List your learning problems in English and brainstorm some useful advice.Useful expressions ? I don't know how to…... Is a big difficulty for me. I cannot ...? You might try …. It's very important to…? I have no idea how/what .My biggest problem is .... ? I (also) have trouble with. My advice is …. This worked for me.? l cannot understand the teachers’ English in class.Step 5 Homework：為提高我校學(xué)生的英語口語水平，我們將舉辦英語演講比賽(English- speaking contest)，請你根據(jù)下面的信息，以學(xué)生會(the Students‘ Union)的名義寫一份海報，歡迎全校同學(xué)參加，屆時特邀本校美籍教師史密斯先生頒獎。? 報名時間 9月30日以前(報名:signup)? 報名地點 學(xué)生會辦公室? 比賽時間 10月9日晚7:00~9:00? 比賽地點 學(xué)校大會議室? 獎勵 前8名
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 1 Cultural Heritage-Reading and Thinking教案二
1. This section focuses on "Understanding how a problem was solved”, which is aimed to guide students to analyze and discuss the challenges and problems faced by cultural heritage protection during the construction of Aswan Dam, as well as the solutions. On the basis of understanding, students should pay attention to the key role of international cooperation in solving problems, and attach importance to the balance and coordination between cultural heritage protection and social and economic development. Students are encouraged to face challenges actively, be good at cooperation, and make continuous efforts to find reasonable ways and means to solve problems.2. Enable students to understand the main information and text structure of the reading text;3. Motivate students to use the reading strategy "make a timeline" according to the appropriate text genre;4. Enable students to understand how a problem was solved;5. Enable students to understand the value of protecting cultural heritage by teamwork and global community;1. Guide students to pay attention to reading strategies, such as prediction, self-questioning and scanning.2. Help students sort out the topic language about protecting cultural relics and understand the narrative characteristics of "time-event" in illustrative style3. Lead students to understand the value of protecting cultural heritage by teamwork and global community;
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 2 Wildlife Protection-Listening and Speaking教案
This lesson is about wildlife protection. The listening and speaking is about “How to protect endangered wildlife ?” Faced with the facts and numbers of wildlife loss, people begin to detect the reasons, then people such as the celebrities (Prince William and Yao Ming) are calling on to protect them. So students are guided to enhance the awareness of protecting wildlife and try to take part in some volunteer activities of protecting wildlife.1. Predict the content by using visuals. 2. Learn to use the sentences such as “I’m concerned about.... But now they are in danger. I want to know the reasons/why./ What can we do to protect them ?3. Learn from the stars like Prince William and Yao Ming and enhance the awareness of protecting wildlife.4. Guide students to try to put forward the solutions to the problems of wildlife protection and then discuss them with partners and present the results of discussion.5. Master the pronunciation of stressed syllables.1. Learn from the stars like Prince William and Yao Ming and enhance the awareness of protecting wildlife.2. Guide students to try to put forward the solutions to the problems of wildlife protection and then discuss them with partners and present the results of discussion.3. Learn to use the sentences such as “I’m concerned about.... But now they are in danger. I want to know the reasons/why./ What can we do to protect them ?4. Master the pronunciation of stressed syllables.Part A Listening and Speaking--- How to save endangered wildlifeStep 1 Lead in1. Point at the pictures on P14 and ask Q1: What message do these posters share?
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 3 The Internet-Reading and Thinking教案二
Q5：What's Jan's next goal?Her next goal is to start a charity website to raise money for children in poor countries.Q6：What can we learn from her experiences?We learn that when we go through tough times, we can find help and support from other people online. We learn that we can feel less lonelyStep 5: While reading---rethinkingQ1: What is Jan’s attitude to the Internet ?Thankful/Grateful, because it has changed her and her life.Q2: What writing skills is used in the article ?Examples(Jan’s example, the 59-year-old man’s and the 61-year-old woman’s example)Q3: Can you get the main idea of the article ?The Internet has changed Jan’s life/Jan’s life has been changed by the Internet.Step 6 Post reading---Retell the storyMuch has been written about the wonders of the World Wide Web. There are countless articles (1)telling(tell) us how the Internet has made our lives more convenient. But the Internet has done a lot (2)more(much) for people than simply make life more convenient. People’s lives (3) have been changed(change) by online communities and social networks so far. Take Jan for example, who developed a serious illness that made her (4)stuck(stick) at home with only her computer to keep (5)her(she) company. She joined an online group (6)where she could share problems, support and advice with others. She considered the ability to remove the distance between people as one of the greatest (7)benefits(benefit). She was so inspired (8)that she started an IT club in which many people have been helped. She has started to learn more about how to use the Internet to make society better. Her next goal is to start a charity website to raise money (9)for children in poor countries. Jan’s life has been (10)greatly(great) improved by the Internet.
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 5 Music-Discovering Useful Structures教案一
Step1:自主探究。1．(教材P52)Born(bear) in the USA on 2 January 1970, Whitacre began studying music at the University of Nevada in 1988．2．(教材P52) Moved(move) by this music, he said, “It was like seeing color for the first time．”3．(教材P56)I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged(discourage)．4．(教材P58)Encouraged(encourage) by this first performance and the positive reaction of the audience, I have continued to play the piano and enjoy it more every day．Step2:語法要點精析。用法1：過去分詞作表語1）．過去分詞可放在連系動詞be, get, feel, remain, seem, look, become等之后作表語，表示主語所處的狀態(tài)Tom was astonished to see a snake moving across the floor．湯姆很驚訝地看到一條蛇正爬過地板。Finally the baby felt tired of playing with those toys．終于嬰兒厭倦了玩那些玩具。注意：1）.過去分詞作表語時與被動語態(tài)的區(qū)別過去分詞作表語時，強調(diào)主語所處的狀態(tài)；而動詞的被動語態(tài)表示主語是動作的承受者，強調(diào)動作。The library is now closed．(狀態(tài))圖書館現(xiàn)在關(guān)閉了。The cup was broken by my little sister yesterday．(動作)昨天我妹妹把杯子打碎了。2）感覺類及物動詞的現(xiàn)在分詞與過去分詞作表語的區(qū)別過去分詞作表語多表示人自身的感受或事物自身的狀態(tài)，常譯作“感到……的”；現(xiàn)在分詞多表示事物具有的特性，常譯作“令人……的”。
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 5 Music-Reading for Writing教案二
The Internet celebrity Gao Yifeng. Years ago, he owned 5 companies and the staffs over 1,000, but during the economy crisis, he became nothing but debt. He was so worried that his hair became white overnight. There was a time when he wanted to killed himself. But after listening to the song Start Over by Liu Huan, he decided to cheer himself up. He started a steamed bun shop and gradually became a national chain shops. Now he became successful again.Walter Haddon said, “Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force. Music gave him courage and bravery. When he listened to the song, it made his spirit fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave him strength and brought him relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. I hope none of us have to go through the same kind of suffering that he did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help us in the same way that it helped him. I hope we all will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of our life. Thank you for your listening !5.Revise your writing each other.Does he/she explain how music has changed his/her/someone else’s life?Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly ?Does he/she talk about how music makes him/her/someone feel?Is the first word in each sentences capitalised?Does he/she use correct punctuation ?
